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雅思A类写作范文征集！！！（免费改作文）
由于本人正在筹划一本比较另类的写作的编写，需要大量的学生例文。因此，特地在此征集！！
要求如下：
作文格式：4段式或5短式（即整篇文章要么写5段，要么写4段，可以两方面讨论，也可以当方面写）
字数要求：250-280words，题目请从下面24篇内任意选择一篇！！！这些文章都是2006年已经考过的文章，非常适合大家练笔。
其次，写好的文章直接放在本篇文章的评论里，每个题目只限一篇，即同样的题目第2次写的人我就不改了！！！这句话的意思是：大家写的文章我会非常详细的点评，所以大家肯定是不吃亏的，呵呵。。。
好了，大家快点行动吧。我只挑２４篇改，多一篇也不行，呵呵。。。而且要选择不同的题目写，如果一样，我只挑先传上来的人的那篇改！
1。Some parents think advertising tells too much information about snacks and toys to children. But companies think advertising also shows useful information. Discuss. ( 9/2)
2。Multi-cultural societies are mixtures of ethnic groups. To what extent do you think the advantages of multi-cultural societies outweigh the disadvantages? ( 8/26)
3。When we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?( 8/12)
4。Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain people. Others think the pursose of museums is&to educate, not& to entertain. Discuss ( 8/5) 　　
5。Some people think earlier technology changed humans‘ lives more than recent technology. Do you agree? ( 7/ 29, 2006)
6。Some people think students should live at home with their parents. Others think children should live at school. Discuss.
7。There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create? ( July 8, 2006)
8。Some people think students should go to private secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( June 24, 2006)
9。The best way to solve environmental problems is to raise the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( June 17, 2006)
10。Some people think we should provide help for the local communities. Others think we should give money and support to the national and international organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ( June 10, 2006)
11。Some people think we should ban animal experiments. Others think it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ( May 27, 2006)
12。Some people think the advantages of international tourism outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree? (May 20, 2006)
13。Some people think the housing shortage in big cities can only be solved by the government. Do you agree or disagree? ( May 13, 2006 )
14。Some people believe that national sports teams who represent their country should be financially supported by the government. Some other people think they should be funded by non-governmental resources such as corporations and individuals. Do you agree or disagree? ( April 29, 2006)
15。Some people think space travel such as landing on the moon is important. Others think people will not remember this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ( April 8, 2006)
16。Long-distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses in many years and pollutes the air. Some people think non-essential flights should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( March 25)
17。Some people think schools should only teach students academic knowledge. Others think they should also teach students to judge what is right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ( March 18, 2006)
18。Today many young people cannot find a job after they graduate from university. What are the individual and social reasons for this phenomenon? (March 11, 2006)
19。There are many security measures in big cities today to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (Feb. 25, 2006)
20。Long distance flight consumes natural resources and pollutes the air. Some people think it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( Feb 18, 2006)
21。In many countries, the number of elderly people is increasing fast. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? ( Feb 11,2006)
22。Technology and science have great influence on our lives. But some people think we should also value the work of artists such as musicians, painters and writers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( January 21, 2006)
23。There are many problems associated with mobile phones today. What are these problems and to what extent do the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages? ( January 14, 2006)
24。Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree? ( January 7, 2006)&
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我写第18篇
“Graduation means you are unemployed”, maybe many students are familiar and agree with this view. Today, more and more young people cannot find a favorite job after their graduation, the employment rate of students is only 73 percent in 2005. I think individual as well as society should take responsibilities for this phenomenon.
First of all, since 1998, most universities have been enlarging their admissions, so the number of students is inflated. However, not only the number but also the qualities of teachers fail to grow with the rate corresponding to the students’ increase. As a result, with the inflation of the number of students, the qualities slide down, part of students must face unemployment as soon as they graduate.
Second, nowadays a lot of university students think that to earn money is more important, and this goal is unrelated with study, they believe the quick success is around them and it is unnecessary to work hard to grasp a practical technique. But, chances are always for the prepared mind, having no useful skills is the main reason of unemployment.
Last but not the least, with the development of economy, some big cities develop quickly, a great deal of university students swarm to there after graduation, even though the west of our country lacks for human resource. The unbalance should be solved though the government control, such as the students who intend to work in the west should be given some priorities.
As a whole, I believe this phenomenon can be improved by the government’s control and individual’s struggle. We should strive for the harmonious society.
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可以的，你把全文都传上来
现在这个只有第1段么
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才一篇，大家要踊跃投稿阿，呵呵。。。。
批改时间一般在一周以内
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讲广告的利弊的
It&goes&without&saying&that&we&live&in&a&world&which&covers&advertising.&So&it&is&no&wonder&that&advertisements&have&been&influencing&people’s&daily&life.&Some&people&hold&the&opinion&that&the&merits&outnumber&the&demerits.&However,&I&am&in&favor&of&the&co-existence&of&this&argument.&It&is&just&like&an&immoral-and-perishing-sided&spell.&
Each&dog&has&its&day.&Regard&it&a&good&idea&that&the&primary&purpose&of&advertisements&is&to&express&the&commodities&to&us,&which&enable&us&to&be&familiar&with&them.&Without&drumbeating&the&businesses&may&lose&the&effective&way&to&spread&their&products.&We&cannot&imagine&how&slow&the&commercial&development&will&be.&What’s&worth&mentioning&is&that&it&creates&idea&from&the&designers.&For&instance,&we&learn&‘impossible&makes&possible’&from&the&Canon’s&ads,&which&encourages&people&universally.&Likewise,&we&acquire&‘to&me&the&past&is&black&and&white,&but&the&future&is&always&color’&from&the&Hennessy’s&one,&which&shares&the&life&style&with&more&people.&So&advertisements&are&not&just&advertisements.&It&generates&varies&kinds&of&notions&about&life.&
Each&cloud&has&a&silver&lining.&Some&advertisements&can&mislead&customers&in&many&aspects.&They&may&magnify&the&quality&of&the&goods&at&no&allowance.&It&has&highlighted&the&disadvantages&whether&it&can&be&trust.&For&example,&more&and&more&people&like&electronic&shopping&and&they&buy&things&just&from&the&picture&and&what&it&is&described&in&TV,&of&course,&but&when&they&have&purchased&the&commodity,&they&found&they&were&deceived.&Moreover,&people&are&getting&bored&of&the&continual&ads&more&or&less.&
By&and&large,&advertising&has&so&far&received&both&critics&and&praises.&For&better&or&worse,&it&will&still&be&the&part&of&modern&people’s&life.
牛牛老师看一下怎么样?
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报名抢个座位先，我要写第11篇
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第23篇
With the development of science and technology, mobile phones grow rapidly, so do problems about using cell phones.
Cell phone courtesy may be one of the most important problems which should be mentioned. People always use mobiles in public places, such as buses, restaurants, libraries, museums, some people talk loudly on mobiles which interfere with people around him, “No cell phones” signs are putting up all over, the device have been banned in many places. Moreover, according to the theory of mobile phones, when it is being used, the radiation mobiles release can influence the surrounding, such as some devices in hospitals, the guide system of planes, people who use cell phones long time often feel slight headache and hear noises in their ears. To some extend mobiles change the way of communication between people, now we can tell others something only by our thumb—short messages, so we can say the chance people communicate each other is decreasing.
In spite of those problems, mobiles have important advantages in transmitting information without the limit of location and time. It provide much convenience to people’s life and work , information is transmitted more fluently and more quickly, undoubtedly, it is a necessary tool for people in information age. In front of the advantages of cell phones, its disadvantages are so trial that they can be ignored, furthermore, people are realizing the problems associated with mobiles and are trying to improve these situations.
I believe with the improvement of people’s opinion and technology, the problems can be avoided and mobiles can serve us more advantageously.
实在不好意思
写的不好 牛牛老师凑合着看吧
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大家不要跟我抢哦
我要写19篇
因为我是法学院的，哈哈。
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呃。。。小新还没讲到Task&2。。。
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可以，只要不重复，一个想写几篇都行。不过要给我一周的时间批，呵呵。。。
大家要耐心一点！！！
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楼上借用别人文章的同学，由于你的文章不是我题目中的，所以我就不仔细分析了！！！
不过，我还是认真的看了一篇。写得很不错，不像是受培训的人写出来的文章。里面引用了些例子，挺有新意的。文章也写得很流畅。
总得来说，7分肯定有，我觉得8分也是可以的。就看考官实际情况给几分了。就我个人而言，7。5可能比较合适。但是实战中作文没有半分的。。。
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呵呵,老师真好~~~~谢谢老师了
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11。
&&We&all&knows&that&science&researches&need&experiments.&And&lots&of&experiments&especially&medical&and&pharmaceutical&experiments&have&the&animals,like&dogs&and&monkeys,involved.&When&coming&across&the&question:”&Are&animal&experiments&should&be&banned&?”&,&people’s&opinions&differ.
&&&Some&people&think&we&should&ban&animal&experiments.&They&argue&that&animals&are&friends&of&human&beings.&Some&animals&such&as&dogs&accompany&with&children&and&bring&happiness&to&families.&If&animals&are&tested,&they&are&definitely&hurt,&even&killed&by&experiments.&It&is&so&cruel&for&the&lovely&animals.&Animals&are&so&innocent&that&they&should&not&be&hurt.&It&is&so&selfish&for&people&to&carry&on&experiments&on&animals.
&&&Others&hold&the&opinion&that&animal&experiments&are&necessary&for&the&development&of&science.&Without&animal&experiments,&medicine&won’t&be&allowed&to&apply&to&the&human&being&for&its&danger.&And&the&animal&experiment&is&the&best&way&to&know&ourselves.&We&can&take&the&advantage&of&the&animals&to&test&new&drugs.
&&&As&to&myself,&I&agree&with&the&latter.&I&love&animals.&But&the&life&and&health&of&human&being&outweigh&it.&In&the&case&of&disease,&such&as&SARS,&animal&experiment&is&inevitable&to&be&carried.&The&sacrifice&of&animals&is&worthy,&if&compared&with&that&of&people.&It&doesn’t&mean&we&are&permitted&to&kill&animals.&We&should&protect&the&animal&unless&we&have&no&other&way&to&choose.&In&short,&although&we&should&protect&animals,&animal&experiment&is&still&necessary&for&the&development&of&science.
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写惯了4，6级的文章，摆脱不了那个模式了。雅思那个TASK2还没有上过，牛牛你就凑合看吧。谢谢！
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楼上讲广告的利弊的,那个文章咋就嘎眼熟呢~不,是耳熟才对.里面的经典句都是小新上礼拜传授我们的来着……牛牛老师啊，由于小小的意外，这周末才能上你的课~哎，再不听你讲讲话，看来我真的要对阅读没感觉了，快来救救偶吧~明年两月考试了，现在还没萨数，不过从偶考好的同学看，貌似阅读最容易拿高分的说，你赞成不^_^
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占个位子先，我写第四题，表跟我抢哦，拜托！！
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米人写第4题的哦!那我来写!我会尽快搞定的!
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失误...我写第5...
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牛牛偶拿不出手的作文来了,我写的时候都在想怎么样把我想说的表达出来,还有怎么样凑够字数,所以文章里面肯定有语法和表达不清楚的地方,请指教,麻烦了!!写的是第四题.
Recently&museums&have&become&place&of&interest&in&some&cities.&some&people&maintain&that&museums&should&be&built&enjoyable&places&to&make&people&relax&whereas&other&are&confident&that&the&main&function&of&museums&is&to&educate&.not&only&for&entertainment,&After&close&inspection&I&would&like&to&support&the&museums&disseminate&human&beings’&knowledge&and&history.&which&are&more&significant&for&education.&the&reasons&as&following&.
The&main&purpose&of&museums&is&illuminate&the&culture&and&arts&of&the&world&.museums&as&milestone&of&cultural&display.&Provide&visitors&with&all-round&knowledge&about&the&development&of&human&beings&.if&one&want&to&know&about&the&progress&of&technology&and&history.&he&can&have&a&tour&to&museum&.where&he&can&get&much&useful&knowledge&our&forefather&have&made&in&history.&and&the&essential&knowledge&is&still&in&use&today.
Secondly&organizing&students&to&visit&museum&has&been&part&of&education&of&some&primary&school.&most&teachers&admit&that&students&will&get&better&understanding&of&their&science&lesson&form&museums&than&textbooks.&Jingjing&,one&of&Chinese&primary&school&students&said&that&,he&wouldn’t&got&understanding&about&the&principle&of&whitelight&until&visiting&to&science&and&technology&museum&.where&a&detailed&the&natural&phenomenon&is&presented&vividly.&And&surprisingly&he&has&got&a&high&score&in&the&examination.
Last&but&not&least&Recording&the&history&and&education&are&the&final&goal&of&improvement&and&building&theme&museum.&Such&as&military&museum.&or&aviation&museum.
Form&what&has&been&cited&above.&We&may&safely&draw&the&conclusion&that&although&the&art&museum&and&music&museum&make&people&relax&and&mental&edification.&The&main&purpose&of&museum&is&to&educate.
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我先预定13，晚上回家就写！
大家别跟我抢哦~~~
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我先预定第3篇，大家让让A!!!!
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这是第5篇，原本刚拿到题目的时候觉得应该不难写，真正等到开始写的时候发现有些词穷..牛牛帮忙看一下吧..
Overall,&I&disagree&the&opinion&expressed.&&Earlier&technology&and&recent&technology&have&the&same&effect&in&our&life.&&In&this&essay,&I&will&take&about&the&medicial&technology&and&the&living&technology&to&prove&my&view.
Medicial&technology,&as&other&technology,&is&in&order&to&improve&the&quality&of&humans’&life&which&has&being&researched&continuously.&&Whatever&earlier&technology&or&recent&one&has&the&same&aim&that&it&cure&people&of&diseases.&&Nobody&can&say&earlier&medicial&technology&can&just&treat&the&cough&or&cold&so&does&it&change&our&life&less&than&the&recent&one&which&can&solve&some&difficult&brain&problem.&&Surely,&people&always&seek&for&the&solution&of&every&disease.&&In&any&case,&all&the&medicial&technologies&are&equally,&so&we&need&not&compare&them.
The&same&is&true&in&living&thchnology.&&People&invented&chair,&so&we&sit&on&the&ground&no&longer.&&Later,&when&we&invented&sofa,&which&can&make&us&feel&more&comfortable&when&we&are&sitting.&&Both&of&them&all&change&our&life&a&lot&.&&Before&the&air&conditioner&has&been&invented&,&nobody&will&complain&that&the&fan&is&useless&in&our&life.&&As&the&same&reason&above,&in&different&time&has&technology&affacted&to&our&life&differently.&&Anyway,&the&living&technology&is&in&order&to&raise&the&standard&of&our&life,&to&make&it&more&satisfactory.
To&sum&up,&I&think&it&is&by&no&means&to&compare&which&of&these&two&changes&our&life&more.&Technology&development&is&a&process&step&by&step.&Every&footprint&represent&the&contribution&which&it&made&for&humans’&life.&&Just&as&I&expound&above,&earlier&technology&and&recent&technology&have&the&same&influence&in&humans’&lives.
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作文不好，只好多写，占个位子１２题．边哭边写．表跟我抢．
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Jack,不好意思，本来想写13题的，一不小心写了12题了，sorry啊
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Recently,&it&is&reported&that&tourism&covers&a&growing&proportion&of&gross&global&production,&from&which&we&can&conclude&that&there&is&an&increasing&tendency&for&people&to&experience&the&joys&of&travel.&In&the&circumstances,&some&people&suppose&that&the&benefits&from&international&tourism&are&more&important&than&its&negative&effects.&But,&I&hold&the&opposite&opinion&with&three&reasons&given&in&the&following&text.
Admittedly,&international&tourism&can&bring&money&and&job&opportunities&to&many&countries,&especially&some&developing&countries,&such&as&Thailand,&Philippines,&where&tourism&plays&a&vital&role&in&domestic&economy.&However,&tourism&,&with&irretrievable&damages&to&the&ecosystem,&gives&rise&to&serious&contamination.&In&most&travel&resorts,&some&tourists&always&abandon&rubbish&anywhere&instead&of&into&the&ash-bins.&Furthermore,&some&carve&their&names&on&the&trees&or&stones,&only&for&marking&the&spots&where&they&used&been.&Unfortunately,&it&is&not&only&purely&ecosystems&which&are&destroyed,&but&also&some&ancient&monuments.&With&the&awareness&of&environmental&pollution,&now,&the&concept&of&“sustainable&tourism”&has&been&focused&on,&which&gave&birth&to&“eco-tourism”.&Whereas,&so-called&“eco-tourism”,&I&am&afraid,&can&not&help&at&all.&People&are&so&attracted&by&this&new&tourism&style.&Ironically,&some&countryside&where&used&to&be&peaceful,&with&their&capacities&challenged,&now&are&ruined&by&ever&more&visitors.&
In&addition,&often&a&large&amount&of&money&are&needed&to&attract&tourists.&Instead&of&the&agriculture&or&industry,&useless&recreation&facilities&may&be&built&up.&Then,&tremendous&capital&may&be&wasted&rather&than&providing&for&basic&needs.
More&seriously,&tourism&is&not&an&independent&industry.&It&is&affected&by&many&variable&factors,&such&as&tourist&tastes,&weather,&or&natural&disasters.&For&instance,&tsunami&from&the&Indian&Ocean&in&2004&swept&Maldives&relentlessly,&which&made&the&tourism&market&there&almost&collapse.
In&conclusion,&I&am&convinced&that&it&is&wrong&to&outweigh&the&advantages&of&international&tourism.&In&spite&of&its&contribution&to&the&global&economy,&the&sharply&developing&tourism&is&not&worth&for&people&being&too&optimistic&to&some&extent.
写文章时遇到的小问题：
1.meanwhile能不能放在两个逗号中间，连接两个独立句子？好像副词不能这样用对吧
2.“发挥作用”或者“有效的”怎么用英文表达，文章中我用了一个“help”代替了，能给我一个更好的词吧？
3.“A是B的支柱”怎么说？比如精神支柱，经济支柱？
这是偶写的第一篇雅思作文，绞尽脑汁写的，总而言之，言而总之，写作文太痛苦了！
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补充：上面是13题，有关tourism
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我晕,楼上的大哥你到底写13,12啊,内容是tourism.题号是１３．不管了我写１３题，housing&shortage.这次谁在和我抢,我就去他家哭.
PS:楼上的,我相当占成你的话,写作文太痛苦了,我每天用我复习的大部分时间让自己痛苦.所以我提到作文,就觉得天要塌了.
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请注意，12题才是讲tourism的，所以yini写的是12题！！！
13题就由jack来写吧，大家不要搞错了阿！！！
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我晕,楼上的大哥你到底写13,12啊,内容是tourism.题号是１３．不管了我写１３题，housing&shortage.这次谁在和我抢,我就去他家哭.&
sorry啊，最近被雅思搞得脑子有点短路了，呵呵！我写的是12题啦，jack你写13题吧，别哭哦
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来挺牛牛啦！没有人写第6篇吧。我要了哦，别跟我争嘞！：0哈哈，我晚上就去写。嘿嘿~~~~
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15我预订了啊！
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牛老师那天你做广告的时候并没有说只给改第一篇啊，我还以为只要发过来的都给改。。。赶快把握机会写一个。。。第24个。Gay老师的作文课还只上过一节，所以肯定写的不咋地，不过肯定natural瓦卡卡
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24。Some&people&think&we&should&keep&all&the&money&we&earn&and&not&pay&tax&to&the&state.&Do&you&agree&or&disagree?&(&January&7,&2006)&
Almost&every&government&around&world&now&takes&money&from&its&citizens&as&tax.&With&such&money,&they&are&able&to&improve&the&constructions&within&the&countries,&and&more&importantly,&they&could&develop&educational,&medical&and&welfare&system.&It&seems&that&every&one&will&benefit&from&it.
However,&not&every&one&considers&such&tax&system&a&reasonable&one.&Many&argue&that&they&are&pressured&by&tax,&especially&in&the&developed&countries&where&the&tax&rates&are&rather&high,&for&comparatively&a&large&portion&of&their&incomes&are&collected&by&the&governments.&For&example,&it’s&quite&common&in&such&countries&that&the&amount&of&the&tax&collected&from&the&husband’s&income&is&as&much&as&the&wife’s&total&income.&I&believe&most&women&would&rather&choose&to&stay&at&home&if&there&is&no&income&tax&which&is&so&high.
On&the&other&side,&most&people&support&the&tax&system,&no&matter&how&much&tax&he&pays&every&year.&Just&like&what&I&mentioned&above,&with&the&tax&money,&the&government&could&do&a&great&number&of&things&which&will&benefit&them.&Without&such&money,&how&can&the&roads,&schools,&and&hospitals&be&constructed&and&how&could&we&travel,&receive&education&and&treatment?&So&though&the&tax&rates&are&somewhat&high&in&some&areas,&still&there&are&many&citizens&who&are&willingly&to&pay.
As&to&myself,&I&agree&with&the&latter.&No&one&could&deny&that&the&benefit&he&has&gained&from&the&programs&built&with&the&tax&money.&And&I&believe&that&with&more&money,&the&government&could&offer&us&better&welfare&conditions&and&every&one&will&be&able&to&enjoy&a&better&life&as&a&result,&besides,&it’s&a&useful&way&to&help&the&poor.
狂滴汗。。。写得太差啦！！！！！！真的得好好上Gay老师的课了。。。牛老师凑和看吧。。。
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13题就由jack来写吧，大家不要搞错了阿！！！
感动ING!!牛牛太好了,从小到大没见过这么公平的老师,实在不拜倒在牛&群&下都不行了.
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第六篇哦.
&&How&toeducate&and&cultivate&children&has&been&a&much&debated&issue&these&days.Some&argue&that&living&at&home&with&parents&will&benefit&the&students&whilst&others&counter&by&pointing&out&the&school&is&better&for&children&to&live&at.But&every&cloud&has&its&silver&lining,I&shall&reveal&the&reasons&as&follows.
&&Though&it&is&admitted&that&children&can&receive&more&love&and&better&home&education&during&the&period&of&enlightenment&to&form&exemplary&behaviour&and&thinking,there&is&much&probabilityof&the&formation&of&dependence.Children&can&be&spoiled.For&another,students&may&be&confined&in&the&little&family&then&poor&in&communicating&with&others.Both&of&them&can&cause&ill&effects&in&the&long&run.
&&Adversely,schools&play&an&important&part&in&the&socialization&of&the&children.Meanwhile&the&dormitry&life&develops&the&skills&of&living&independently.Flowers&do&not&last&forever.All&of&the&students&live&at&school&must&follow&the&same&pattern&which&may&obliterate&children`s&creativity,ambition&and&enthusiasm&for&life.In&addition&to&this&,as&parents&worrying&about,living&at&school&may&result&in&alienation&between&children&and&themselves.That&is&a&question&on&family&cultivate&with&love&and&own&career.
&&In&conclusion,children&should&live&at&home&with&parents&during&their&enlightenment&period&and&then&,after&they&have&formed&the&primary&standard&behaviour&and&thinking,they&can&live&at&school&to&develop&their&skills&for&getting&on&well&with&others&and&living&independently.
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牛牛老师多包涵啊,我刚大一,词汇就这样拉!上回十一魔鬼班也只听小新讲了点皮毛嘞.惭愧拉~老师你狠狠批啊,一针见血最好拉!呵呵~~:)不过字数好象有点不够,要不要加生活经历或例子啊?
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第15篇：
Space&travel,such&as&landing&on&the&moon,has&given&rise&to&the&controversy&that&if&or&not&it&is&worthy&of&being&done.Some&people&hold&the&view&that&it&is&impotant,whereas&others&maintain&that&people&will&not&remember&this.To&be&frank,I&am&in&high&favour&of&the&latter&point&of&view.
Those&who&are&for&it&may&say&that,space&travel,as&a&result&of&the&progress&of&science&and&space&technology,will&improve&the&development&of&science&and&space&technology&in&reverse.And&we&will&know&much&more&about&the&outer&space&than&before.Thirdly,overpopulation&has&been&a&serious&problem&today,and&so&is&the&shortage&of&natural&resources.Searching&for&help&in&outer&space&may&be&a&good&choice&for&human&beings.Therefore,space&travel&is&of&great&importance.
However,space&travel,which&usually&costs&a&lot,has&so&far&contributed&little&to&solving&the&problems&we&confront&with&in&emergency.Shall&we&put&more&money&into&a&future&that&we&are&not&certain&of&while&many&of&us&are&still&in&starvation?Space&travel,in&my&opinion,is&just&certain&kind&of&competition&among&big&powerful&countries,whicih&is&made&to&show&the&country’s&science&and&technology&advantagies&and&is&often&connected&to&military&purposes.Thus&some&people&insist&that&they&will&not&remember&this------Who&cares&about&something&that&has&nothing&to&do&with&himself?
Not&in&an&emergency&to&move&to&the&moon,why&not&have&the&large&amount&of&money&spent&on&the&emergency&of&these&poor&countries?We&do&need&to&exploit&the&space,but&that&is&after&we&have&a&world&in&perfect&harmony!&&&
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牛牛，一定帮我评评啊，我头一次写大作文，不久就要考了，心里慌啊！
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！学语法真开心！&今天终于抽空写好了作文，跟以往高中议论文有相同，也有不同，反正写了，牛牛麻烦你了!&写的是第3篇
&&&&&&&&There&is&no&doubt&that&when&you&begin&to&learn&a&language,&both&cultures&and&lifestyles&are&indispensable&for&learning.&Only&learning&cultrues&and&lifestyles&can&you&have&a&good&commond&of&what&you&learn.
First&of&all,&cultures&paly&a&big&role&in&languages.&Colloquial&phrases&are&pleasant&to&the&ear,&not&only&because&they&are&familiar,&but&also&because&they&reflect&a&unique&aspect&of&a&culture&which&is&a&symbol&of&countries&or&living&areas.&So&necessary&do&you&learn&cultures&first&when&you&determine&to&learn&a&new&language.
In&addition,&some&special&languages&in&Canada&and&Austrilia&have&words&that&reflect&a&way&of&life&that&is&connected&close&to&the&Earth.&There&are&fifty&different&words&that&mean&`snow`&in&one&Canadian&native&language.&Various&local&languages&have&been&evolved&through&human`s&lifes&and&have&been&continuing&to&change&step&by&step.&If&we&expect&to&learn&the&most&aboriginal&languages,&lifestyles&count&for&learning.
When&you&make&a&decision&to&learn&languages,&a&good&advice&recommended&to&you&is&that&&living&with&the&local&people&whose&mother&language&is&what&you&will&learn,&can&communicate&with&you&frequently.&In&this&way&can&you&learn&languages&quickly&,efficiently&and&authoritatively.
To&sum&up,&learning&languages&is&not&a&simple&task&but&a&process&of&knowing&different&cultures&and&customs.&So,&to&get&involved&in&the&cultures&and&lifestyles&can&make&your&learning&happily&.I&am&sure&that&you&will&enjoy&every&minute&of&learning&languages.
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还有小个问题麻烦了，现在新东方上课没有写作课，想知道小作文里的graph,table,chart&有什么区别没有？谢谢！（！学语法真开心！）
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A类小作文有这么几种：
柱状图bar chart或column graph
饼状图pie chart
曲线图line graph
表格图table
流程图flow chart
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再次声明一下，由于批作文很麻烦，所以从上传到批改需要至少一周的时间，如果谁有特殊情况需要先批请声明一下，我可以适当调整一下，呵呵
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&&牛牛老师你快点哦。我12.16就考了哦！早批我好早改正嘛。呵呵，真开心~~~：）
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In&major&cities,&problem&with&housing&shortage&seems&to&have&climbed&at&an&alarming&rate.&So
Some&people&hold&that&the&unique&solution&for&the&problem&depends&on&government&action.&&To&be&frank,&I’m&in&high&favor&that&the&problem&of&housing&shortage&is&the&responsibility&of&not&only&governments&but&also&individuals&and&enterprises.
Like&any&else.&Enterprises&are&in&pursuit&of&maximization&of&profits&.taking&no&consideration&of&the&reasonable&utilization&of&land.&Big&companies&and&factories&located&in&the&city&centre&due&to&convenience&in&business&exchange&and&transportation&.however&these&gigantic&companies&and&factories&have&taken&up&so&many&places&on&city&that&there&are&few&lands&resources&can&be&used&in&housing.
On&the&other&hand,&overpopulation&is&also&the&cause&of&this&problem.&Especially&in&china,&although&the&growth&of&accommodation&is&rapid.&It&still&can&not&meet&the&increasing&needs&of&people.&Furthermore&.with&the&burgeoning&of&some&industrial&cities.&People&,attractive&to&comparative&advantages&,such&as&education&and&job&opportunities&,have&been&swarming&into&these&“dreamland&of&fantasy&”,which&brings&heavy&burden&to&the&limited&housing&resources.
Finally&,we&can&not&deniable&the&fact&that&government&lack&social&awareness&and&consciousness&of&equilibrium&between&economic&construction&and&utilization&of&land.&&the&government&of&city&without&the&planning&of&sustainable&development&for&land.&The&policies&should&be&made&to&allow&more&skyscrapers&to&be&built&&
In&conclusion&,actions&to&implement&the&improvement&of&housing&problem&should&await&the&participation&of&government&,big&companies&and&factories&and&individuals&.
写的一身汗，每次写作文的时候就明白啥叫自卑．
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写的是13题，housing&shortage&的问题
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Motorized&flight&is&the&most&important&invention&in&the&mordern&world.not&any&other&invention&has&had&such&a&significant&impact&on&our&lives.to&what&extent&do&you&agree&or&disagree?&
It&is&a&fact&of&life&that&motorized&flight&has&had&such&acrucial&influence&on&we&human&beings.What&is&under&controversy&is&whether&it&is&the&most&vital&invention&in&the&mordern&world.To&a&large&extent&I&believe&so.&
With&the&invention&of&motrized&flight,we&spent&much&less&time&in&transpoting,which&made&our&life&more&efficent&and&convenient,especially&for&those&who&are&busy&with&their&career.Another&advantnge&of&motorized&flight&is&that&it&is&much&safer&than&normal&tranpatation,which&caused&traffic&accidents&frequently&all&over&the&world.Thus,I&consider&motorized&flight&as&safe,convenint&and&time-saving.&
What&is&worth&montioning&is&that&communication&problens&has&already&been&solved,this&technology&will&be&used&in&rencent&years,which&will&benifit&those&who&want&to&keep&touch&with&people&on&land&or&busy&with&their&business.&
Admittedly,other&inventions&in&the&mordern&society&also&changed&and&impacted&our&lives&alot,for&instance,computers,televisions,cell&phones,etc.Even&though&they&improved&our&living&standard,they&always&have&some&nagetive&aepects,especially&foe&children&and&adolecents.&
All&in&all,the&disadvantages&of&other&inventions&far&outweigh&the&motorized&flight.From&what&I&have&discussed&above,we&may&thus&safely&draw&the&conclusion&that&motorized&flight&is&the&invention&of&the&greatest&significance&in&the&mordern&society.
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同Amy,我也那天考，也急啊，呵呵
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calfone你在哪考啊,我在南京考哦.你呢?
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不巧，我在华师大啊，呵呵。不过听我高中同学说南京考口语比上海简给分高，祝你好运喽！
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We&have&intelligent&machine-roborts&in&the&future&to&the&work&instead&of&human&beings.State&the&benifits&and&dangers&of&them&for&a&university&lecturer.&
The&progression&of&science&and&technology&is&inevitable&and&undeniable.What&is&under&controversy&is&weather&intelligent&machine-roborts&in&the&future&do&the&work&for&university&lecturers&will&be&benificial&or&dangerous&to&huan&beings.From&my&viewpoint,there&are&pros&and&cons&simultaneously.&
As&we&all&know&that&every&dog&has&its&day,including&science&progression&absolutely.universities&lecturers&will&have&much&more&leisure&time&than&ever&before.They&will&have&enough&time&to&do&their&own&studies.They&can&devote&themselves&to&what&they&really&want&to&work&on&without&worrying&about&lectures&or&students.They&can&also&enjoy&their&lives,companying&their&families,travelling&across&the&world&without&working&stress,which&will,&make&themselves&healthier&at&the&same&time.&
On&the&contracy,every&cloud&has&a&sliver&lining,which&means&they&will&also&have&some&dangers&for&university&students,especially&for&freshman&who&are&new&in&university&and&do&not&know&much&about&university&lives&and&studies.They&may&feel&extremaly&happy&after&long-years&working&hard&for&college&extrance&examination.They&may&be&misleaded&that&university&simply&means&having&fun.Thus,they&need&a&lecturer&to&introduce&them&how&to&adapt&to&the&new&learning&style.&
Weighing&the&pros&and&cons&of&the&double-edged&sword.I&figure&that&intelligent&roborts&can&do&some&parts&work&for&university&lecturer,and&the&funtion&of&the&lecturers&will&still&exist&in&recent&decades.
牛牛帮忙看看哦,西西,我离死不远了
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Many&people&use&distance-learning&programs&such&as&study&metrial&post,TV&and&Internet&to&study&at&home,but&some&people&think&that&it&can&not&bring&thr&benifits&as&much&as&attending&college&or&university.Do&you&agree&or&disagree&with&it?&
It&has&been&widely&noted&that,with&the&popularity&of&distance-learning&program,there&crops&up&a&Juda'kiss&of&a&social&issue&weather&it&is&necessary&to&attend&college&or&university.My&view&has&been&that&it&is&still&indispensable&and&inevitable&to&attend&college&or&university.Here&I&will&discuss&the&pros&and&cons&of&the&two&learning&styles.&
As&is&known&to&us&all&that&social&skills&is&becoming&more&and&more&vital&in&the&mordern&world.What&we&need&to&do&is&not&only&learning&knowledge&from&books&and&teachers,but&also&communication&skills&and&how&to&get&harmony&with&our&surrondings,which&reguires&getting&along&with&others.Thus,I&figure&studying&through&distance-learning&programs&can&not&give&us&the&opportunities&to&improve&these&practical&abilities,which&are&actually&more&crucial&in&the&society,especially&the&business&world.Viewed&from&this&angle,if&wo&focus&on&our&future&development,we&had&better&choose&to&attend&college&or&university,which&severs&more&benefits&obviously.&
In&addition,&as&a&saying&goes,you&have&an&apple,I&also&have&an&apple,if&we&change,we&will&still&have&an&apple,but&if&you&have&a&thought,I&also&have&a&thought,if&we&change,we&will&both&have&two&thoughts.college&or&university&give&students&a&chance&to&discuss&questions&or&change&their&thoughts&face&to&face,which&will&make&them&more&mature&and&objective.&
On&the&other&hand,distance-learning&programs&can&not&offer&that.&
All&in&all,I&definitely&agree&with&the&perspective&that&attending&college&or&university&is&more&advantageous&to&a&large&extent.
还是我的,西西,有劳老师咯
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你写得是我给的题目吗，不是的话，我就简单的评一下，好不好？！
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大家放心，我下周会把所有的作文全都批好，一个不漏，要快考试的人也不要急，下周五之前肯定能批完，呵呵。。。。。。
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牛牛最好了，我们都知道哈哈
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牛牛．小新的ＢＬＯＧ是多少啊？
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这是小新的博克地址，怎么跑到我这里来问了
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牛牛，你的作文书什么能出出来啊．．我想我是等不到了．．１２月考了．．．能不能先透露点核心idea啊
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写的是白皮书上的科技题
12月16号就考了
麻烦牛牛老师咯
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老师你有给题目吗
发到我的邮箱好不好啊
Amy我跟你一起考哦,也在南京
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呵呵，喵喵，一起加油哦！那天有战友陪咯！
哈哈。真开心~~：）
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为什么没人写第一篇呢?呵呵,那我定了啊!我16号的考试,谢谢大家体谅!!!
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A&disputed&issue&which&drew&our&attention&recently&is&that&the&combat&between&parents’&complaints&about&too&much&commerce-based&advertisements&which&provided&children&with&nothing&but&merely&meaningless&staff&and&the&companies’&positive&attitudes&towards&the&useful&information&through&this&media.&Since&nowadays&we&are&all&evolved&in&this&information&age&that&get&us&much&exposure&to&a&bunch&of&advertisements&with&various&information,&it&is&surely&a&dilemma&if&someone&is&asked&to&judge&between&the&two&parties&above.&Nevertheless,&I&will&choose&to&be&on&the&company&side&as&far&as&I&am&concerned.
People&are&largely&dependent&on&informative&details&from&advertisements&without&which&making&their&choices&would&be&harder.&This&point&can&be&strongly&proved&by&those&annual&fashionable&trends&youngsters&follow.&We&can&easily&found&a&certain&group&of&people&who&wear&the&exact&sort&of&perfume&or&the&same&hairstyle&on&almost&each&head.&There&is&no&way&if&a&brand-new&product&spreads&nationwide&immediately&after&its&birth&just&by&sharing&ideas&with&friends&around&you.&We&only&discuss&about&qualifications&of&this&product&after&knowing&it&from&advertisements&on&TVs,&posters&or&other&mass&intermediates.&
Snacks&and&toys,&tough&mainly&designed&for&teens,&do&take&one&part&of&the&on-sale&information&advertisements&convey.&Admittedly,&all&food&producers&expect&a&promising&prospect&of&their&products,&they&then&will&naturally&exaggerate&to&a&certain&degree&by&planning&creative&notions&and&exuberant&ads&lines.&But&through&those&introductions,&parents&may&acquire&a&better&understanding&of&which&one&they&are&much&more&into.&Take&milking&powders&for&example,&if&milking&powders&with&famous&brands&are&much&more&frequently&chosen,&babies,&as&we&believe,&are&less&likely&to&get&hurt&or&even&poisoned&as&they&sometimes&suffered&before.
People&hold&the&opinion&that&a&sacrifice&always&come&along&with&a&reward,&which&reflects&upon&this&topic.&What&parents&are&not&satisfied&with,&from&my&view,&is&actually&children’s&overacting&upon&advertisements&instead&of&an&advertisement&itself.&Advertisements,&tough&slightly&blur&consumers’&eyes,&are&on&their&way&of&helping&us&a&reasonable&choice.&&
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终于明白为什么没人写第一篇了.啥也不说了,全是汗......
牛老师,我写的第一篇(见上).
16号的考试,您给看看.
麻烦给个band,还有主要问题
跪谢!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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南京16号考的还有谁啊
大家交换下联系方式
考场有个照应哦
还有拜托牛牛老师了，快点帮我们把作文改出来哦
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如果可以，我想24篇每篇都写，不知道老师是否有空？是否愿意辛苦地改一改？？。。如果愿意，我每天1篇---2篇的写，然后传上来。。（写作初学者） J.C.
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牛牛……13号了哎…………
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今天刚回来，希望明天能够公布出来，让你们久等了，呵呵。。。
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喵喵你怎么不回我嘞？我号码是。记得看到联系我啊！还有16号在南京考的战友们，联络一下好有照应嘛，呵呵，紧张嘞~~~~：）
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老师你批作文的时间还真长啊
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还好还有不少没有写的，我要多写一些，一天写两篇！我贪心一点了啊，我挑两篇　16　17
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我已经批了很多了，还有谁的没批阿，提醒我一下！！！是哪几题？！
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Topic 16:Long-distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses in many years and pollutes the air. Some people think non-essential flights should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ( March 25)
Nowadays, as the world’s connection becomes more and more close, there are many chances for people to go to other countries. It’s obvious to see that flying is a quick and convenient way to get to our destination. But there is a problem arising: Long-distance flight consumes large amount of fuel and pollutes the air, should non-essential flights be banned or not? My answer to this question is definitely yes.
Several reasons can be used to illustrate that, firstly, people cause too many pollutions today which greatly affect our living environments. For example, in some highly-polluted cities we can see sunshine no longer and we can hear no chirps of birds. We can’t experience the beauty of nature just because we polluted it so heavily. There is no reason for us to aggravate this pollution by adopting so many flights.
Secondly, since now the world’s resources become so scarce, we should try our best to limit the use of non-renewable resources and to exploit these resources which cause no pollution to environment. Now that Long-distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses in many years, why we still use it so frequently? Besides, there is an advantage if we choose train or other ways instead of plane, because we can enjoy the wonderful scenery of passing places, while on the plane we can see nothing but the sky.
According to what I had said, I have every reason to believe that it is not only necessary but also beneficial to ban non-essential flights.(256 words)
牛牛帮帮忙改下啊，急切期待中......非常感谢:)
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为方便大家，我粗略的数了下，以下题目好像被预定或者写了的：
1 2 3 4 5 6 11 12 13 16 17
23 24
我要加把油，多写一些:)机会多难得哦：）
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19我预订了哦。
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Topic17:Some people think schools should only teach students academic knowledge. Others think they should also teach students to judge what is right and wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Generally speaking, there are two opinions about school’s function, some people think school is a place for student to learn academic knowledge only while others hold the opposite view that school should teach students the ability to judge what is right or wrong as well. For my part, I’m more prone to the latter view.
School is, no doubt, a place to learn academic knowledge, from which we can get to know many new things and phenomena happened surrounding us with the help of teachers and good facilities.
However, I don’t think teaching academic knowledge is the only target of education. I believe other things such as integrity, the ability of judging good and evil, right and wrong are, if not far
more important than, at least as important as academic knowledge. If these people who are good at mastering knowledge have an evil heart, they can’t make any contrib while on the contrary, a lot of harm could be done.
On the other side, we can never judge a person’s quality by how much knowledge he (she) knows just like we can’t judge a book by its appearance. Our society needs these people who can serve it well. An all-around person with a noble heart as well as a profound understanding of academic knowledge is the most popular in this competitive society.
To put all into a nutshell, cultivating the students’ ability to judge right and wrong is the responsibility of our schools. Our school should pay more attention to this responsibility without ignoring the importance of academic knowledge. (263 words)
看前面人还没有写，嘿嘿，我赶紧写了:)谢谢牛牛，圣诞节快乐:)
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Toppic 21: In many countries, the number of elderly people is increasing fast. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? ( Feb 11,2006)
Nowadays, owning to the improvement of living condition, people can live much longer than before, which gives rise to the fast increasing number of elderly people. Some hold that this situation will result in a series of problems, such as social burden, population expansion and so on. While others insist that it agrees the development of modern society and brings many advantages. For my part, I take the latter side with the following reasons:
Firstly, elder people are the fortune of our society. They have enough experiences and capabilities which are badly lacked and needed for our youth when dealing with all sorts of problems, they can still do well in their jobs. Especially in some professions, such as teacher, doctor, scientist and so on, sometimes age means the authority and ability. When you see a doctor, do you prefer an elderly doctor with grey hair or a youth without mustache?
Secondly, elder people are the happiness of our society. Increasing number of elderly people is also the embodiment of our improving living quality, which shows our society run to the right and healthy direction, we have more chance and time to serve our elderly people, and it’s the happiest time of all our life to accompany with our parents, grandparents and great grandparents.
Finally, elderly people are the lubricant of our society. They have good temper and enough patients to do anything, they can help us to intercede social disputes, and they make our society much more harmonious which makes for the construction of harmonious society.
From mentioned above, the advantages of increasing number of elderly people are obvious more than it disadvantages. Elderly people are not the burden of our society but the source of fortune, happiness and harmony of our society.
也写了篇麻烦牛牛帅哥了:)
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牛牛，有空的时候帮我改下好不,16 17还没用改的，这几天一上网第一个打开的就是你的blog，好期待被&批&啊，新年快乐:)
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唉，等了快两个月了，作文16 17 21；牛牛老师，是不是现在不改作文了啊，如果不该了麻烦你说下吧，非常感谢！
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不是我不改，是我眼睛还没好，不能长时间看电脑，不好意思，呵呵。。。
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哦，是这样啊，那还是尽量少用电脑，等完全好了有空再改吧。祝牛牛眼睛清澈如水：）
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牛牛　我３月１０号考了　你精品班的　写的第２篇　这篇好象不大好写嘛．．．不知道写的怎么样　　仔细看看吧　谢拉　新年快乐～～
Multi-cultural has been brought to spotlight recently, as a prevailing phenomenon nowadays that the countries on the earth are becoming more and more exchanged .People at every corner to share and enjoy the same spiritual life together, which not only promote a climate of peace and prosperity but also enrich the city life and broaden the horizons of human beings. Such a trend has both merits and demerits although, as for me, the former prevails over the latter obviously.
I am in favor of the Multi- first, because it promotes a climate of peace and prosperity, misunderstanding would not be occurred between nations with the reason of racial differences and cultural differences. Take it for example, in the past of China, because of the semi-colonial and semi-feudal economy, the government close the country to international intercourse ,people’s life was very monotonous, they could not understanding the occidental civilization .but now, in nowadays ,as the government implements its reform and opening to the outside world, people could through all kinds of rode to acknowledge the other country’s cultural, they will adapt and absorb the western literature,custom,and the viewpoint with the things ,it will advance national unity
I am approve of the Multi-cultural ,second ,because it will be favorable to the global integrated .as a saying goes “survival of the fittest”, a multi-cultural social must have the multi-language ,multi-lifestyle ,even multi-managing method ,competing would inevitable ,and the most adapt the social developed will be leave behind. The human beings would elaborate the abilities as far as they could, the government will find a best way to administer the society, and to build it more harmoniously.
Opponents of the argue ,the unique heritage, languages and artistic expression will become scattered and lost .Some linguists are fully aware of the loss of languages ,there is not much they can do.
All in all, the fact that multi-cultural society will becoming a global trend in the future ,unquestioned, it must be advanced, but at the same time, while striving to develop the diverse cultures, we also should to protecting the local culture ,to uphold ethnic and cultural identity.
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牛牛老师..我3月3号就要考作文了..你能不能预测下是第几个球..task 2..
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貌似没人写14篇，那我就预定啦
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几号球是小新老师的专利，我不研究那个球，分类也是不一样的！！！
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那我想知道剩下的四天里我的作文要准备下什么内容的,,急需啊...上完你的, 痛恨 ,的语法课后,回厦门到现在都没准备过作文..不知该如何是好?心情有点小紧张,,不过刚看了你的那个 老师是混蛋,老师的儿子也是混蛋 等经典笑话语录就 轻松很多了..想开了..不就是死嘛.大不了再见 纯洁又善良，一节课下来笑个不停 的 gay （牛牛老师）
一次面..开心。。。。。
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作文么上课老师把方法都讲过了，你所需要的就是认真的写个几篇，再让水平高的人改一下！！！
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这么多人投稿，你给稿费or not？If you do,我也来玩～
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牛牛,我是寒假班的,写了第22篇.我也3月10考了 麻烦您赶紧抽时间帮我看看我的作文都存在什么问题,需要哪些改进.谢谢!!
Since it is undeniable that the work of artist is valueable, even recently it is has been brought to spotlight, as such the musicians, painters and writers are all playing a very important role in rapid society. Diverse contributing factors can be identified. To be frank, I am in high favor of the status of these artists will not be displaced forever, and among which, I will analysis it in 3 factors: the social requirement, the individual’s demand, and the human beings progress.
Firstly, the socials developed could not without the artists’ contribution. although we inevitable that the fundamental factors which advanced the social’s development is science and technology ,but suppose that if the world have no such these artists ,the metropolis will have no sculptures even though full with sk the street corner will have no interesting advertisement in spite of the boring slogan will be signed here and there. How can we live in a city like this? And in the sametime, some cities where have lots of painting and sculptures are always attractive science places, which can attract many tourists coming.
Secondly, the urban life will also could not depart from the artists’ creation. We should remind their work of the versatility, mental edification, and spiritual abundance. After a busy-work days, we could enjoy music to relax ourselves, in the weekend we will go to the cinema to watch a film with the family or friends, and even we can go to the exhibition center to admire the panting to mold our sentiment. We should remember, all of this are the artists bring to us.
Finally, the worldwide human beings progresses are also inseparable with the artists’ value. Just imaging that if countries only owned advanced technology, the native culture, the tourism, even the languages will not be exchanged. For the reason of culture divergence, the oriental and occidental people maybe could not c it will be reflected in the music, literature, and emotion. The artists just like a bridge, to link up the countries cultures, make the distance much more closely.
To sum up, artistic projects can fulfill human’s spiritual demand, making our lives more beautiful. We should encourage these artists to create more and more positive creations. The government should not only climate encouraging freedom of thought, imagination, and inquiry but also the material conditions facilitating the release of these creative talents.
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牛牛一定要赶紧抽时间帮我看噢
没几天了 好紧张啊..........
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牛牛老师,,你应该知道小新的行踪或者电话吧..赶快呼叫下.....不然要死很多人的..他三月份的作文都还没有预测....不过再过俩天就有很多人要考了....急!急!急!
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我等等通宵写一篇..希望你明天有空改下..我的雅思第一篇作文就靠你了..你说要找个水平高的..我看8级,又是雅思作文高手的你应该很够格做这件事了..先谢谢了..以后一定请你喝水...
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你这是夸我还是骂我啊！！！我以前也是写作老师，你们要预测的话，上他的博克就好了，直接问
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抱歉，好像我说话的方式有点不对，让你误会了。。希望不要生气，我并不是跑来你这里然后不停地说他。。。一直以来都是很看重牛牛老师的，因为很有个性。。。对了，现在还在吗？。。等等我就把作文发上来，你有空帮我改改，很需要你到处的修改，我看过你给他们改的那些文章了，，都很认真，作文就麻烦你了，，不过要快。。。没有办法，非常时期。。。辛苦了。。
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When a country develops its technology ,the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To waht extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a fact of life that the development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. In my opinion, this is not necessarily a bad thing, because some aspects of traditional culture hamper progress and should be abandoned. Moreover, it is natural that people should want to find new ways of doing things.
why the substitute is inevitable and undeniable? It is obvious that the trend diversifies the world, even every people. New science and technology promotes greatly the people's living standard, teaches them how to do is better and effective at work and at home, what to tackle the difficult matter that people can't cope with in the past, or which new medicine can keep you a regular diet and increase you ages.Therefore, the science and technology exposes us to the universe. As is known to everyone , we human beings as well as poultry long before. The moment we could not go anywhere except staying a small hill.Now we can expand our insight include exploring the mystery that ocean, sky, even other orbs.
On the contrary.Provided that the traditional skills and ways of life are going to keep.You will see the view that 100 workers do a thing with hands instead od a worker with a machine. As Marx said & The evolution of industry is natural and necessary,but also will pass.&
We can conclude that the progress of science and technology has both positive and negative effects.What we must do is make sure the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.
高中水平，有的是新东方背的。。看在我明天还要上课通宵打的份上，帮我分析下作文的题目，一直不太懂，迷迷糊糊套出来的。。。谢谢了。。给我打个分吧。让我心里有个数，就算让我死心也好
。。。。
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牛牛 有时间的话快点帮我改作文好伐
急的呀 忽忽
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真的是急啊...后天就考了,,麻烦尽快改下..
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已经有多少篇了？哪些写好了？
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Topic 10:
The developments of local communities and national international organizations are important results caused by social improvement. Thus a heatedly discussed issue is that whether we should help the local communities or provide money and support to the national and international organizations. However in my opinion they are both necessary and complementary that we should not quit neither of them.
Local communities play an important role in our daily life. Meanwhile they contribute a lot to the cultrual development. A unforgetable memory is that I joined a local league whose aim is to help the senior citizens in need when I was in high school. The group I belonged to was respected to help an old lady who lived alone and in a poor health. Our regular visits made her didn't feel lonely any longer.What's more,our activities jnflunced other citizens living in the same community,and they egan to help the old lady as well. A good atmosphere formed. It's not difficult to imagine how terrible our life will be without local vommunities, those who need help may receive much less cocerns, and people's sense and awareness of helping each others whould fade away.
Some people hold the opinion that national and international oranizations have nothing to do with us common people which I strongly disagree with. The best example is the international children fund SOS. The organization have heop thousands of children who have no patent or home from different places. Maybe some of them is not far from us. To many degrees, national and international organizations are the advanced form of local communities, they have the similar functions and effects.
In other words, local communities and national and international organizations are the two sides of a coin. We can begin with helping local communities, then, we can go on to support the national and international organizations.
在看不懂题目的情况下写了，效果一定很惊悚！
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我在金华，所以只能在评论里说。
大致看了下，觉得你的写作水平很好。这篇文章的整体水平不错，应该有7分的潜力。
但是，还是有些细小的错误。比如every people,as far as possible,promotes greatly,what to tackle the difficult matter,As is known to everyone , we human beings as well as poultry long before等等，可能会使你的文章降到6分。
我的意思是你的句型还是很丰富的，但是一定要保证正确率，否则最多6分了！！！
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上面我改的是jc的文章
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